Before
I found a publisher, I had some vague notion that the process involved an
experienced editor coming along with a magic pen and basically fixing all the
mediocre things in my manuscript. I mean, yes, I expected to do some rewriting.
Delete scene here, add one there. Everyone complains about the hideous pressure
of rewriting under deadlines, so I wasn't completely
naïve. But I guess I imagined that my editor would also be more like my high
school English teacher, smoothing out awkward sentences and polishing my story
until it shone.
Well,
I soon discovered that's my job. I
was going to have to whip this puppy into shape alone.
Oh
boy.
I'm
still new at all this, so maybe some editors leap into the trenches. Mine (who
is wonderful, by the way) just sent me my manuscript back with notes in the
margins. She didn't order me to accept every single suggestion, just what I
agreed with. As it turned out, I agreed with basically everything. And it was a
ton of work. I had to murder characters that I adored, and develop others who
were necessary but half-baked. I slashed and burned entire chapters that I had
slaved over for weeks. By the end, my head was spinning a little and I wasn't entirely sure what I'd
done, but I felt pretty confident that it was a lot better than what I'd
started with. Having an intense deadline looming over me helped, because I
couldn't afford to agonize or second-guess, I just went with my gut and didn't
look back.
And I
think that's how it should be. The beauty of a good editor is that they have
the perspective to view your story from a distance (which, when you've been living
with something for so long, is not a vantage point that's available to you
anymore). A good editor will point out the big stuff, as well as the small
stuff. They'll gently break the news that some of your favorite material isn't
really serving any purpose in the narrative. They're like an
architect, helping to fine-tune the blueprints to your dream house.
But
the sweat that goes into hammering those boards together? That's all you.
Kat's debut, Some Fine Day, comes out July 1 from Strange
Chemistry. You can find her on Twitter and her website.
I feel your pain, sister! :) When the first email arrived from my editor, I glanced at them and said, "Huh. Not so bad." And then I read them. LOL - big changes were requested but it only took a few sentences to say what she wanted, which just happened to resonate throughout the whole book.
ReplyDeleteBut your novel SOME FINE DAY sounds awesome, so I'm sure all that sweat was worth it. Can't wait to read it!
Truth! :) And I freaking love that dog video!
ReplyDeleteoh, thanks guys! yes, Kym, exact same reaction with me! and then I was like, actually, to do this RIGHT, I have to really roll up my sleeves and write many thousands of new words!
ReplyDeleteand Margo...I know. that expression is just priceless. I can SO relate, lol!