So this
was a little tough, largely because I'm still in the middle of revising key
parts of the book! But my editor and I agreed that there are plenty of polished
scenes ready for an excerpt.
This
one is toward the end of the first chapter. Our main character, Jansin, has
never seen the sun. She lives in an underground city-state called Raven Rock.
Her dad, a general, has just arranged for the family, plus Jan's boyfriend
Jake, to go to the surface on holiday for the very first time. She's never been
inside a mole before but she knows how they work: back end a simple pod with
seats, front end a boring machine that drills through rock and dirt and
whatever else gets in its way.
Jansin
doesn't know it, but this vacation is about to go wrong in ways that will
change her life forever…
About the book:
Sixteen-year-old
Jansin Nordqvist is on the verge of graduating from the black ops factory known
as the Academy. She's smart and deadly, and knows three things with absolute
certainty:
1.
When the world flooded and civilization retreated deep underground, there was
no one left on the surface.
2. The
only species to thrive there are the toads, a primate/amphibian hybrid with a
serious mean streak.
3.
There's no place on Earth where you can hide from the hypercanes,
continent-sized storms that have raged for decades.
Jansin
has been lied to. On all counts.
Excerpt from SOME FINE DAY, July 2014 from Strange
Chemistry
"Beverage?" the attendant asks,
and I thank her and take a soda. We're an hour or so in, and the trip is
actually turning out to be kind of boring, just like Captain Dan said.
The red-headed kid is across the aisle on
my left, hammering away at a game. His parents are nursing cocktails. The mood
has gone from apprehensive to lethargic and half-drunk, by the glassy looks of
some of the passengers. The mole is very smooth, soundproofed as promised, no
hint of the rock being explosively vaporized a few feet away. Just a slight
upward tilt to my seat.
I doze off, thinking about the sheep and
the valley and the sun breaking through the rainclouds. It's become my favorite
daydream.
Then I feel Jake's hand on my arm.
"We've stopped," he says.
And I realize that there's no hum under my
seat anymore. It must have just happened, because no one else seems to have
noticed.
"Is that normal?"
"I have no idea."
We wait. I keep expecting Captain Dan to
get on the intercom, but he doesn't. Half the passengers are asleep, the others
reading quietly or watching the cane network. Tracking the storms is something
of a national obsession.
Then a guy toward the back yells,
"It's not moving. Why is it not moving?"
His voice slurs a little, and there's an
edge of panic there.
Uh-oh, I think.
"Now sir," an attendant says,
gliding down the aisle with a fixed smile on her face.
But the cat's out of the bag now. A low
murmuring begins, as people start to grasp what's happening. The attendant
holds up her hands. She's young and pretty and immaculately groomed.
"There's nothing to worry about. The
mole ahead of us snapped a rotor on some bedrock. It's being repaired. We
expect to be moving shortly."
"What does that mean? How
shortly?" The man calls out. He's half risen from his seat. The
middle-aged woman next to him, wife or girlfriend, puts a restraining hand on
his arm and he shakes it off.
The attendant knows better than to tell him
to calm down, which usually has the opposite effect on people. "Why don't
I just check with the captain and get an update?" She disappears into the
forward cabin.
No one speaks for a minute. I know it's my
imagination, but the temperature in the mole seems to go up a few degrees.
"How much air do they carry on these
things?" someone asks.
I sip my soda and share a look with Jake.
"Moles have redundancies built into
their redundancies," he says quietly. "Foolproof."
I don't really want to be the one to say
it, but we're all thinking it anyway, so I go ahead.
"Black Dome."
Jake snorts and looks away, like he's
disappointed in me. But before he does, I see a flash of fear.
Black Dome.
It happened six years ago. I was only ten,
but I remember every detail. My parents tried to shield me, unsuccessfully,
since it was all anyone talked about for weeks.
Five moles, twenty-five passengers and crew
each. Departed from Black Dome launch station on August the nineteenth. Fair
skies above, a perfect window for an excursion to Gallia Archipelago.
Ninety-three adults, thirty-two children.
The tremors started about halfway up, the
mole equivalent of turbulence on an airplane. Ice rattling in glasses, maybe a
bag or two toppling from the overhead bins. No one's too alarmed at first. But
then they get stronger.
Subterranean quake, six point six in
magnitude. The epicenter was two hundred miles away, so the moles weren't just
crushed like the glorified tin cans they are. What happened was worse.
They got trapped.
For thirty-seven days.
The military tried to send in diggers, a
smaller, more maneuverable version of moles, to reach the stranded passengers,
but the rock was too unstable to get close. Their com uplink still worked,
although after a couple of weeks, people stopped talking.
Pre-order SOME FINE DAY now at Amazon or
Barnes
& Noble.
Oh! That's a great teaser! I'd totally be freaking out if I were on that mole!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds amazing...love the voice too. Looking forward to it!
ReplyDeletethanks guys! looking forward to finishing these last-minute revisions, lol!
ReplyDelete